Research Peer Review

During the peer review session with Reet, Grace, and Jenny, their feedback highlighted the need for me to add more content to my work. They pointed out that my drawings required further development and suggested that I expand on my ideas. I agree with their assessment and believe that completing the remaining drawings and incorporating additional details will enhance the overall quality of my project. I will accept their suggestions and ensure that my work is comprehensive and sufficiently descriptive.

During the second peer review session with Victoria, she provided valuable feedback on my project. She suggested that I should update my research pages using my own photos taken in China Town. She also mentioned that she was in the process of updating her own project proposal. It was encouraging to hear that she liked my chosen location, as there were many unusual shapes that could be extract and would be beneficial in garment design. I appreciate Victoria’s feedback and will take her suggestions into consideration as I continue to do my project.